Drop use cases section

contents/1-intro.tex

@@ -36,6 +36,6 @@ In \cref{sec:vision} we the overall vision for the \pgls{ESAP} system: what did
 \Cref{sec:delivered} takes that further by describing what is currently available: if one were to deploy and operate an \pgls{ESAP} system today, what would it consist of?
 
 The second part of this document moves on to asses how successful that vision and implementation have been in addressing user --- and in particular \gls{ESFRI} --- needs.
-In particular, \cref{sec:requirements} tabulates the documented requirements and compares them to delivered product; \cref{sec:usecases} discusses how \pgls{ESAP} relates to all the use cases collected by the \gls{ESCAPE} project; and \cref{sec:esfri} describes current \gls{ESFRI} engagement with the platform..
+In particular, \cref{sec:requirements} tabulates the documented requirements and compares them to delivered product, while \cref{sec:esfri} describes how some of the major \gls{ESCAPE} project \gls{ESFRI}s are engaging with and building upon the work carried out by \gls{WP}5.
 
 Finally, we consider potential future enhancements in \cref{sec:future}, and provide a summary of the results of this analysis is presented in \cref{sec:conclusions}.

contents/2-vision.tex

@@ -3,6 +3,7 @@
 
 This section presents a brief overview of the vision for and design of \pgls{ESAP}.
 It supplements and expands upon earlier discussions \cite{ESCAPE-GA, ESCAPE-D5.2, ESCAPE-D5.3} to describe current thinking about how \pgls{ESAP} can best meet its goals.
+The vision is inspired by and aims to address a wide rage of \glspl{ESFRI} use cases that have been expressed by the project partners through the \gls{ESCAPE} Project Platform.\footnote{\url{https://project.escape2020.de}}
 Note that not all of the capabilities described in this section are currently available in the \pgls{ESAP} codebase: see \cref{sec:delivered} for a description of the current state of the art, and \cref{sec:future} for future development plans.
 
 \subsection{High-Level Summary}

contents/5-usecases.tex

-\section{Use Case Analysis}
-\label{sec:usecases}