diff --git a/contents/1-intro.tex b/contents/1-intro.tex index a069159ec4012dd9f1193aa91b895654d898a992..26cbc7d698da56b5c165ff9edfc0b56289638ef0 100644 --- a/contents/1-intro.tex +++ b/contents/1-intro.tex @@ -36,6 +36,6 @@ In \cref{sec:vision} we the overall vision for the \pgls{ESAP} system: what did \Cref{sec:delivered} takes that further by describing what is currently available: if one were to deploy and operate an \pgls{ESAP} system today, what would it consist of? The second part of this document moves on to asses how successful that vision and implementation have been in addressing user --- and in particular \gls{ESFRI} --- needs. -In particular, \cref{sec:requirements} tabulates the documented requirements and compares them to delivered product; \cref{sec:usecases} discusses how \pgls{ESAP} relates to all the use cases collected by the \gls{ESCAPE} project; and \cref{sec:esfri} describes current \gls{ESFRI} engagement with the platform.. +In particular, \cref{sec:requirements} tabulates the documented requirements and compares them to delivered product, while \cref{sec:esfri} describes how some of the major \gls{ESCAPE} project \gls{ESFRI}s are engaging with and building upon the work carried out by \gls{WP}5. Finally, we consider potential future enhancements in \cref{sec:future}, and provide a summary of the results of this analysis is presented in \cref{sec:conclusions}. diff --git a/contents/2-vision.tex b/contents/2-vision.tex index b1f9efba6831f2827ea7c40137f601395cb9e79d..c7bdeddb01ec2cfada45822596942557cc384c44 100644 --- a/contents/2-vision.tex +++ b/contents/2-vision.tex @@ -3,6 +3,7 @@ This section presents a brief overview of the vision for and design of \pgls{ESAP}. It supplements and expands upon earlier discussions \cite{ESCAPE-GA, ESCAPE-D5.2, ESCAPE-D5.3} to describe current thinking about how \pgls{ESAP} can best meet its goals. +The vision is inspired by and aims to address a wide rage of \glspl{ESFRI} use cases that have been expressed by the project partners through the \gls{ESCAPE} Project Platform.\footnote{\url{https://project.escape2020.de}} Note that not all of the capabilities described in this section are currently available in the \pgls{ESAP} codebase: see \cref{sec:delivered} for a description of the current state of the art, and \cref{sec:future} for future development plans. \subsection{High-Level Summary} diff --git a/contents/6-esfri.tex b/contents/5-esfri.tex similarity index 100% rename from contents/6-esfri.tex rename to contents/5-esfri.tex diff --git a/contents/5-usecases.tex b/contents/5-usecases.tex deleted file mode 100644 index fd154f1004e83f8aebcabef94e4da527ec154bd4..0000000000000000000000000000000000000000 --- a/contents/5-usecases.tex +++ /dev/null @@ -1,2 +0,0 @@ -\section{Use Case Analysis} -\label{sec:usecases} diff --git a/contents/7-future.tex b/contents/6-future.tex similarity index 100% rename from contents/7-future.tex rename to contents/6-future.tex diff --git a/contents/8-conclusions.tex b/contents/7-conclusions.tex similarity index 100% rename from contents/8-conclusions.tex rename to contents/7-conclusions.tex