Add comments from James Collinson

contents/5-esfri.tex

@@ -112,7 +112,7 @@ The \gls{CTAO} team has expressed an interest in continuing to collaborate on \g
 
 The \gls{SKAO} \autocite{2020PASA...37....2W} is an ongoing effort to build the world's largest radio astronomy observatory.
 It consists of a pair of radio interferometers, currently under construction in Australia and South Africa.
-The Australian site will house 133,000 antennas sensitive in the range 30--350\,Mhz, while the South African site will consist of 197 dishes covering 0.35--15\,GHz; both systems are illustrated in \cref{fig:skao:telescopes}.
+The Australian site will house 131,072 antennas sensitive in the range 30--350\,Mhz, while the South African site will consist of 197 dishes covering 0.35--15\,GHz; both systems are illustrated in \cref{fig:skao:telescopes}.
 Test systems are already taking data, and the facility is expected to be operational by the end of this decade.
 
 The \gls{SKAO} is designed to conduct transformational science, breaking new ground in astronomical observations.
@@ -139,7 +139,7 @@ The members of this Regional Centre Network are then collectively responsible fo
 \begin{itemize}
 
 \item{Data logistics, including making data available to end users;}
-\item{Data processing, including providing computational and storage resources and appropriate software environments to enable end users to interact with the data and produce additional data products;}
+\item{Data processing, including providing computational and storage resources and appropriate software environments to enable end users to visualize and interact with the data and produce additional data products;}
 \item{Data archiving and curation, including data discovery and re-use;}
 \item{User support.}
 

main.tex

@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
 \setDocTitle{Final Assessment of the Performance of the Science Platform Prototype}
 \setWorkPackage{WP5, ESFRI Science Analysis Platform}
 \setLeadAuthor{John D. Swinbank (ASTRON)}
-\setOtherAuthors{}
+\setOtherAuthors{James Collinson (SKAO)}
 \setDueDate{2022-11-30}
 \setDueMonth{M46}