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Contrast this with batch processing, discussed in \cref{sec:vision:capabilities:batch}.
The processes and tools required for \gls{IDA} differ substantially from field to field and from facility to facility.
For example, the way that data from the \gls{SKA} will be analyzed is very different to the processes applied to data from the \gls{LHC}.
For example, the way that data from the SKA will be analyzed is very different to the processes applied to data from the \gls{LHC}.
It is therefore essential that \gls{ESAP} implement a flexible capability for interfacing with a variety of \gls{IDA} services.
The architecture described in \cref{sec:vision:capabilities:ui}, together with the data orchestration system described in \cref{sec:vision:capabilities:orch}, are designed to make this possible.
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The development of this Regional Centre Network is now in its prototyping phase.
As part of this, The Regional Centre development effort is now evaluating a number of potential technologies --- \gls{ESAP} among them --- for use within the \gls{SKA} Science Platform \autocite{2023:SkaPlatformVision}.
As part of this, The Regional Centre development effort is now evaluating a number of potential technologies --- \gls{ESAP} among them --- for use within the SKA Science Platform \autocite{2023:SkaPlatformVision}.
