From 10b2ffe9568bcd6970143c69010239933a11543d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Rob van Nieuwpoort <nieuwpoort@astron.nl>
Date: Mon, 28 Dec 2009 12:08:31 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Bug 1198: processed editor comments
---
doc/papers/2010/SPM/spm.bib | 40 ++++++++++++++++++++++---------------
doc/papers/2010/SPM/spm.tex | 2 +-
2 files changed, 25 insertions(+), 17 deletions(-)
diff --git a/doc/papers/2010/SPM/spm.bib b/doc/papers/2010/SPM/spm.bib
index 846f18044df..80822e94a0e 100644
--- a/doc/papers/2010/SPM/spm.bib
+++ b/doc/papers/2010/SPM/spm.bib
@@ -795,6 +795,7 @@
note = {\url{http://dx.doi.org/10.1051/eas:2005169}},
journal = "European Astronomical Society Publications Series",
year = 2005,
+ number = 2005,
volume = 15,
pages = "431-444",
}
@@ -1427,6 +1428,7 @@
editor = {F. Mintzer},
volume = {52},
number = {1/2},
+ pages = {199-220},
OPTmonth = {January\hspace{0mm}/\hspace{0mm}March},
year = {2008}
}
@@ -2840,8 +2842,12 @@
title = {{The LOFAR Telescope: System Architecture and Signal Processing}},
author = {{Marco de} Vos and Andre W. Gunst and Ronald Nijboer},
journal = IEEE,
- note = {To appear},
- year = {2009}
+ volume = {97},
+ number = {8},
+ pages = {1431-1437},
+ month = {August},
+ year = {2009},
+ OPTnote = {Digital Object Identifier: 10.1109/JPROC.2009.2020509}
}
@@ -2985,13 +2991,13 @@
@Manual{amd-manual,
title = {AMD Stream Computing User Guide Revision 1.1},
OPTkey = {},
- OPTauthor = {{Advanced Micro Devices Corporation (AMD)}},
- OPTorganization = {},
- OPTaddress = {},
+ author = {{Advanced Micro Devices Corporation (AMD)}},
+ OPTorganization = {Advanced Micro Devices Corporation (AMD)},
+ address = {Sunnyvale, CA},
OPTedition = {},
- OPTmonth = {August},
+ month = {August},
year = {2008},
- OPTnote = {},
+ note = {See \url{http://www.amd.com/stream}.},
OPTannote = {}
}
@@ -3061,8 +3067,8 @@
}
@Article{askap,
- author = {Johnston, S. and Taylor, R. and Bailes, M. and others},
- OPTauthor = {Johnston, S. and Taylor, R. and Bailes, M. and Bartel, N. and Baugh, C. and Bietenholz, M. and Blake, C. and Braun, R. and Brown, J. and Chatterjee, S. and Darling, J. and Deller, A. and Dodson, R. and Edwards, P. and Ekers, R. and Ellingsen, S. and Feain, I. and Gaensler, B. and Haverkorn, M. and Hobbs, G. and Hopkins, A. and Jackson, C. and James, C. and Joncas, G. and Kaspi, V. and Kilborn, V. and Koribalski, B. and Kothes, R. and Landecker, T. and Lenc, A. and Lovell, J. and Macquart, J.-P. and Manchester, R. and Matthews, D. and McClure-Griffiths, N. and Norris, R. and Pen, U.-L. and Phillips, C. and Power, C. and Protheroe, R. and Sadler, E. and Schmidt, B. and Stairs, I. and Staveley-Smith, L. and Stil, J. and Tingay, S. and Tzioumis, A. and Walker, M. and Wall, J. and Wolleben, M.},
+ OPTauthor = {Johnston, S. and Taylor, R. and Bailes, M. and others},
+ author = {Johnston, S. and Taylor, R. and Bailes, M. and Bartel, N. and Baugh, C. and Bietenholz, M. and Blake, C. and Braun, R. and Brown, J. and Chatterjee, S. and Darling, J. and Deller, A. and Dodson, R. and Edwards, P. and Ekers, R. and Ellingsen, S. and Feain, I. and Gaensler, B. and Haverkorn, M. and Hobbs, G. and Hopkins, A. and Jackson, C. and James, C. and Joncas, G. and Kaspi, V. and Kilborn, V. and Koribalski, B. and Kothes, R. and Landecker, T. and Lenc, A. and Lovell, J. and Macquart, J.-P. and Manchester, R. and Matthews, D. and McClure-Griffiths, N. and Norris, R. and Pen, U.-L. and Phillips, C. and Power, C. and Protheroe, R. and Sadler, E. and Schmidt, B. and Stairs, I. and Staveley-Smith, L. and Stil, J. and Tingay, S. and Tzioumis, A. and Walker, M. and Wall, J. and Wolleben, M.},
title = {{Science with ASKAP. The Australian Square-Kilometre-Array Pathfinder}},
journal = {Experimental Astronomy},
year = {2008},
@@ -3116,7 +3122,7 @@ Keywords: Radio astronomy techniques, Radio telescopes, Square
@Misc{meerkat,
title = {{Karoo array telescope (MeerKAT)}},
-note = {see \url{http://www.ska.ac.za/}.}
+note = {SKA South Africa, Johannesburg, South Africa, 2010, see \url{http://www.ska.ac.za/}.}
}
@Article{ska,
@@ -3129,7 +3135,7 @@ note = {see \url{http://www.ska.ac.za/}.}
OPTnumber = {},
OPTpages = {},
month = {July},
- OPTnote = {},
+ OPTnote = {DOI: 10.1117/12.786780},
OPTannote = {}
}
@@ -3194,13 +3200,13 @@ note = {see \url{http://www.ska.ac.za/}.}
@Manual{cuda-manual,
title = {{NVIDIA CUDA Programming Guide Version 2.0}},
OPTkey = {},
- OPTauthor = {NVIDIA Corporation},
+ author = {NVIDIA Corporation},
OPTorganization = {},
- OPTaddress = {},
+ address = {Santa Clara, CA},
OPTedition = {},
- OPTmonth = {July},
+ month = {July},
year = {2008},
- OPTnote = {http://developer.nvidia.com/cuda},
+ note = {\url{http://developer.nvidia.com/cuda}},
OPTannote = {}
}
@@ -3280,7 +3286,7 @@ optimized CPU version on an Intel 2.4 GHz Core 2 with a 4 MB L2 cache.
OPTvolume = {},
OPTnumber = {},
OPTseries = {},
- OPTaddress = {},
+ address = {Burlington, MA, USA},
OPTedition = {},
OPTmonth = {},
note = {ISBN: 0750685824},
@@ -3394,6 +3400,7 @@ address = {Kinross, Scotland}
journal = {{ACM Transactions on Design Automation of Electronic Systems}},
year = {1996},
volume = {2},
+ number = {4},
pages = {384--409}
}
@@ -3403,6 +3410,7 @@ address = {Kinross, Scotland}
journal = {{IEEE Transactions on Computers}},
year = {1995},
volume = {44},
+ number = {5},
pages = {609--623}
}
diff --git a/doc/papers/2010/SPM/spm.tex b/doc/papers/2010/SPM/spm.tex
index 86532f0b6f9..de986cdb824 100644
--- a/doc/papers/2010/SPM/spm.tex
+++ b/doc/papers/2010/SPM/spm.tex
@@ -791,7 +791,7 @@ number of combinations is $(nrReceivers \times (nrReceivers + 1)) / 2$ (see Sect
If we substitute this, we find that the $AI = nrReceivers + 1$. For
LOFAR, we can assume 64 receivers (each in turn containing many
antennas), so the $AI$ is 65 in our case. Therefore, the performance
-bound on NVIDIA hardware is $65 \times 5.6 = 363$ gflops. This is only
+bound on NVIDIA hardware is $65 \times 5.6 = 364$ gflops. This is only
39\% of the theoretical peak. Note that this even is optimistic,
since it assumes perfect overlap of communication and computation.
%The efficiency can improve if additional processing is performed on the GPU
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