From 050caeb8916b0941550338777964436a45e1611d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: John Swinbank <swinbank@astron.nl>
Date: Tue, 13 Jul 2021 08:52:24 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] Emphasize contribution of external developers

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@@ -63,7 +63,7 @@ However, we identify three specific areas of activity where it is appropriate fo
         It is appropriate for the \gls{SDCP} to schedule work on the technical underpinnings of its product offering which do not directly provide new capabilities or features to end users.}
 
   \item{Community collaboration.
-        The \gls{SDCP} team will explicitly seek collaboration with external experts in an effort to engage them with our internal development effort.
+        The \gls{SDCP} team will explicitly seek collaboration with external developers and other experts in an effort to engage them with our own efforts.
         We believe that by combining ASTRON's internal development effort with this external expertise, the best results can be achieved both for ASTRON and for the wider community.
         However, external parties will clearly bring their own ambitions and goals in addition to those advanced by ASTRON; our schedule and development effort must be flexible enough to accommodate these.}
 
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